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The crushing truth

March 13, 2012
By Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

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Everything I knew about him
was a lie
everything he said to me
was a lie
he never cared at all
I'm devastated
crushed
he fed me lie after lie
and i believed him
what a fool i was
i fell in love with a part of him
that doesn't exist
that monster killed me
ripped out my heart
i feel numb
i want the things i heard about him
not to be true
to be fake. lies
but i know its not
deep down i know it isn't
he meant everything to me
it crushed me when i truly found out
my love was based on his lies
I'm lost, broken now
thats to that monster

© Asia B., Hudson, MA

The author's comments:
Its how i feel right now. i fall in love with this guy (Jason) who i thought was the greatest guy in the world but turn out to be the opposite i found out what he tried to do with my friends, WHICH IS DOWN RIGHT WRONG!!! ANYWAY I'm writing how i feel right now. PLEASE COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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