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The genocide

April 26, 2012
By Amanda24 DIAMOND, Lynnfield, Massachusetts
Amanda24 DIAMOND, Lynnfield, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
" Move on. It's just a chapter in the past. But dont close the book, just turn the page.


In the moor of light
Lay a silver bell with reflection of night
Mad by the creation of hell
Men and women were left to dwell
Pure demon poison flood
This morbid liquid was in his blood.
They marched in suits of navy blue
One by one the soldiers grew.
With every solider the Jewish population became lesser and lesser.
Only one man stood behind this all, he sometimes goes by the name Teppichfresser
Brain distorted and mentally unstable
Adolf Hitler was no longer just a fable
Millions of nave people were burned and killed
The less people the more he was thrilled.
They poisoned and starved some
Many women were saw hung
Hitler was troubled in lost in pain.
Many thousands thought he could change.
One genocide that people will never forget
Adolf Hitler killed with zero regret.



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DanielM SILVER said...
on May. 18 2012 at 6:25 pm
DanielM SILVER, Kent, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I would rather hated million times for what i did then loved a million times for what i didn&#039;t do.&quot; - Daniel Moto<br /> &quot; I&#039;ve sought out to be the best i could posibly be but when i hit a roadblock in life what did i do, i had two choices either stay at the roadblock or i take this roadblock and make of it and go around it and achieve my goal. So, what will it be?&quot;- Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &quot;People take love like its a four letter word or just a phrase that you tell people or your friends all the time. But in reality love is much bigger than a merely phrase or 4 letter word. Instead love is a genuine promise or covenant to that special person.&quot;-Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;Why change yourself when you were made perfect and wonderfully by the creator of everything?&rdquo; &ndash; Daniel Mathia <br /> <br /> &ldquo;If live is not hurtin then were really not living in.&rdquo; &ndash; B. Reith

I found your poem highly intersting. The thing i would suggest is speaking a little bit on the point of view of the people who are in your poem. Other than i found your tilte and message intersting

tigers said...
on May. 18 2012 at 6:24 pm
tigers, Arvada, Colorado
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nice poem please comment on some of mine:)

tigers said...
on May. 18 2012 at 6:22 pm
tigers, Arvada, Colorado
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interesting poem! Please comment on a few of mine thank you