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How Does It Feel?

May 3, 2012
By AJ.Wundirland BRONZE, Brunswick, Ohio
AJ.Wundirland BRONZE, Brunswick, Ohio
3 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't take life too seriously, nobody gets out alive anyways


How does it feel
to hold the knife
you stuck in my back
a million times?
How does it feel
to be buried alive
by the words left unsaid
the ones kept inside?
How does it feel
to die each day
from the absence
of truth causing pain?
How does it feel
to be left alone
by the person you loved
you thought you’d know?
How does it feel
to cross the line
by saying things
that spilled from your mind
How does it feel
to be the person
that nobody wants
for every reason
How did it feel
to be me for a day
to have my life
and have you taken away?
It feels as if you still don’t care
but darling, I’ll still meet you there
where the terrible live,
at the gates of He**,
where we will burn eternally.


The author's comments:
I hate poetry with a passion, but for some reason, I decided to write this... read, comment, rate, check out my other work? Please(: thanks ^-^

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on May. 8 2012 at 4:23 pm
AJ.Wundirland BRONZE, Brunswick, Ohio
3 articles 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't take life too seriously, nobody gets out alive anyways

awh thanks! And yeah sure, I'll check it out(:

on May. 8 2012 at 4:19 pm
Nicole8808 BRONZE, Newburyport, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 14 comments
I LOVE your poem. I especially love the lines: "How does it feel/to be buried alive/by the words left unsaid/the words kept inside". You're very talented. I'm new here, would you check out my first poem?