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May 9, 2012
By QueenNys GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
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The blood runs from your hands
and soaks into my carpet...

Each drip,
Each lie,
Why must you lie?
Why must you let the blood
drip?
She cried for freedom,
so you took her life...
I know better,
so I just clean the mess...

© Kimberly C., Houston, TX

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my metaphor, when you lie, you might as well be killing
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QueenNys GOLD said...
on May. 11 2012 at 4:19 pm
QueenNys GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
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Thank you:}
QueenNys GOLD said...
on May. 11 2012 at 4:18 pm
QueenNys GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
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Really tis' more of a wife or long time partener with a killer husband who she cleans up after and hides the secrets so she dosent end up like all the rest, but, yea basically same concept. 
LovelyDuckling GOLD said...
on May. 11 2012 at 1:43 pm
LovelyDuckling GOLD, Hamilton, Montana
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very nice... .it sounded like an abused woman who killed her husband...like he did her with her lies? espescially whe you talk about cleaning up the mess...mind checking out my poem 'those things that never were'?
JessicaRae7 GOLD said...
on May. 11 2012 at 6:46 am
JessicaRae7 GOLD, Buffalo, New York
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short, but simple. I liked it.