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July 27, 2012
By Solumicecast GOLD, Paden City, West Virginia
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Solumicecast GOLD, Paden City, West Virginia
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&ldquo;That&rsquo;s us,&rdquo; he said. &ldquo;Those five nuts right there.&rdquo; <br /> Which one is me?&rdquo; I asked. <br /> The little deformed one,&rdquo; Zoe suggested. <br /> Oh, shut up.&rdquo; <br /> ― Rick Riordan, The Titan&#039;s Curse

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Deep down into the depths of my sorrow,
struggling to get on with my life,
solidified into my heart as was once known as love and happiness,
now solidified into despair and hatred,
long forgotten and lifted to the night further than the moon higher than the stars,
wishing once more the despair and hatred will be love and happiness,
then i shall come down without reigning terror,
further into the sea of dreams we will be together forever.

© Amy Z., Edmond, OK

The author's comments:
I allow now one to get extremely close when I am annoyed. so maybe this time ill try to calm down more often.
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