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September 5, 2012
By mystery_kisses. PLATINUM, Ocala, Florida
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I am like a poem

hard to understand

like blank faces

elegant and beautiful

but sometimes depressing

the beauty of the words

expressing emotion.



I am like a letter

i like to say what i feel

but i dont always let out, i'm trapped in an envelope

cooped up and quiet

lonely and frightened

waiting for someone

to let me out.



I am like a story

sometimes fiction

sometimes non

depending on the topic

wanting someone so bad to read me

trying to be as interesting as i can.

© Jordan K., Oxford, GA

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this is my first poem.(:
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mystery_kisses. PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 5:01 pm
mystery_kisses. PLATINUM, Ocala, Florida
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thanks everyone. im glad yall like my poems! :)
dancing.inthe.rain GOLD said...
on Sep. 26 2012 at 6:55 pm
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i honestly love this. it expresses so much in what seems like few words. it is amazing, keep writing :)
Smileykin234 SILVER said...
on Sep. 26 2012 at 6:54 pm
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Wonderful theres no away around it just wonderful.
unknown_dreamer BRONZE said...
on Sep. 26 2012 at 6:46 pm
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i absolutely love this ! one of my favs for sure. (:
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on Sep. 26 2012 at 6:34 pm
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Love it :P
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Awk thats so true! Keep writing chick! :)
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great job especially for a first poem.