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Like a Thousand Tiny Whispers

October 9, 2012
By Lyd Evermoore BRONZE, Narnia, Other
Lyd Evermoore BRONZE, Narnia, Other
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Hello
Hi


I feel it there
Stretching out like an eternity
In the little breath between words
Like everyone is too scared to say
Maybe we should
And no one wants to answer
Yeah I think so

I feel it there
Hanging
Tenuous and over-wrought
Like a thousand tiny whispers of doubt
Snaking down my phone line
To yours

All those unsaid things

I have to go

Okay

There again
That space
Hup.
That little breath
Then

I love you
I love you too

I feel it there
Stretching out like an eternity


The author's comments:
An effort to describe that tension which slips in, often unwanted in a long distance relationship.

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