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What Would You Do For Me?

October 16, 2012
By so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."


“What would you do for me?”
“I would

Walk through fire,

Touch a blade,

Drink poison,

Die a slave.
What would you do for me?”
“I would

Kiss you first,

Make it last,

Back away slowly,

And then run away fast.”
“If my

Last wish was for

One last kiss,

But stay with me forever,

Would you mutter ‘never’?”
“I would

Scream it to the world,

Make ‘never’ known,

Tear away from you,

And die my own.”



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so_joy SILVER said...
on Nov. 18 2012 at 7:29 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you so much!!!

Gee-Gee SILVER said...
on Nov. 16 2012 at 2:53 pm
Gee-Gee SILVER, MarkedTree, Arkansas
8 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
if you dont like me get over it

this was really good i think you have a future in writting if you really really want it. keep writting ill be looking foward to reading more :) and thank you for commenting on mine as well it means alot

OldYoungOne said...
on Nov. 16 2012 at 2:36 pm
It sounded liek a song when I read this, nice job :) The use of  dialogue was a clever idea and i could see a couple talking on a phone saying these words.

so_joy SILVER said...
on Nov. 14 2012 at 8:59 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you so much!! Would you mind checking out my poems Sitting Alone and Fishbowl? I would love to hear your opinion in them.

on Nov. 14 2012 at 8:28 pm
JoyfulCheers SILVER, St. Croix Falls, Wisconsin
5 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
smile at the world and it will smile back

I love the way you written your poem. You dont see much dialoge or questions in a poem but I loved how you used yours. Great set of tone and usage of words. Your a wonderful writer, keep up the work :D

so_joy SILVER said...
on Oct. 23 2012 at 6:38 pm
so_joy SILVER, Navesink, New Jersey
8 articles 0 photos 722 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the change you want to see."

Thank you! Mind checking out my poem, Sitting Alone? It would mean a lot.

on Oct. 18 2012 at 6:27 am
remember16 SILVER, WhiteLake, Michigan
9 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
This is only a minor setback to a major comeback

i like the way you added dialougue in it, its very good i can relate to this poem too.