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In One Word; Broken

December 1, 2012
By KatMalon SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
KatMalon SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
You miss 100% of the shots you never take.


I am
the dripping ink
on a wet page
sand in your fist
a rock in water
the childhood memories
of a bleeding wound
a wilted rose
left to burn
in the fire of agony

I am
the sorrowful rain
from a smokey sky
here to rust
a golden locket
a shattered mirror
whose shards
only collect dust
the tears of pain
staining your cheeks
a smile
hiding countless hours
of your struggles
to be as good
as the next
the door of life
creaking closed

I am
the sad music
sucking you into
a black hole
of despair
too much change
too little time
unopened arms
not here in time
one step forward
two steps back
the edge of a cliff
anticipating
your final jump

I am
the path
with no return
the feeling
behind your sinking heart
when it drops
to the ground
a gaping scar
never to be sewn together again
the hole in you heart
to be left vacant
forever
a crimson balloon
ascending into the sky

I am
the thought in your mind
that no one cares
your last breath
the distant laughter
that echoes
off your shattered soul
your silent yearning
for help

I am
your reason

to let go.


The author's comments:
I believe we have all felt like a nuisance to some one at some point in our lives (some of us more than others) and that is basically what I decided to write about. Please leave your comments and/or suggestions.

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AbbyJJ SILVER said...
on Apr. 20 2013 at 2:38 pm
AbbyJJ SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
5 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Never say goodbye because saying goodbye means going away and going away means forgetting."

Amazing!!! 

on Dec. 9 2012 at 10:42 am
ThatGirlWithAVoice BRONZE, Brampton, Other
3 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My hobbies include editing my life story, hiding behind metaphors & trying to convince my shadow that I'm someone worth following." - Rudy Francisco

Amazing! I literally found myself leaning towards the screen in anticipation of the next line. The emotion behind this piece is powerful.

kdools6 said...
on Dec. 6 2012 at 6:24 pm
I love writing and my friend Kat is very great too

on Dec. 3 2012 at 9:53 pm
Sharkgirl SILVER, Honolulu, Hawaii
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Brave men may not live forever, but cautious men do not live at all.<br /> Author Unknown

WOW great poem you accually olmost made me cry and thats not very easy to do.