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12:03 am

November 26, 2012
By Abbie2721 GOLD, Minster, Ohio
Abbie2721 GOLD, Minster, Ohio
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Some people will see you as small and weak. Others will see you as strong and brave, but i doesnt matter how anyone else see's you. As long as when you look in the mirror what you see makes you happy.


I wonder how many birthdays,
Were in these last three minutes
How many people where bombarded,
with others congratulations?
And how many people were forgotten?
How many babies where born?
how many people died?
was it enough time for a girl to get sick,
or a man to get drunk?
Was it enough time for a flower to wilt,
or a child to cry?
Did someone get hurt?
or were there spectacular reunions?
Did the child finally escape?
Or is he still trapped?
How many "i hate you's" were said?
How many fist were thrown?
was there a divorce,
where two people separated forever?
is the sky storming,
with buckets of tears?
Did the dance end,
before anyone could enjoy it?
How many tears fell,
without anyone seeing them?
How many lives ended,
without us knowing it?
Did the world turn over,
to send us flying into the sky?
or am i just dreaming?
Dreaming of a world in ruins.
But then again maybe everyone else is dreaming,
and I'm the one left awake.


The author's comments:
Okay, so i was lying in my bed playing on my phone like any other teenager that ever lived, when i decided i was tired. i looked at the time before i went under the covers and noticed that its was already 12:03 am. i was amazed at how fast time had went and soon started that deep thinking. i started thinking about the world and life and soon a poem was forming in my head. Before it could escape i scrambled for my phone and opened notes, and ended up with this creation(after quite a bit of revision) and which I'm very proud of it.

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Abbie2721 GOLD said...
on Dec. 17 2012 at 11:02 am
Abbie2721 GOLD, Minster, Ohio
11 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Some people will see you as small and weak. Others will see you as strong and brave, but i doesnt matter how anyone else see's you. As long as when you look in the mirror what you see makes you happy.

wow thanks alot. i really love this poem so its great to have positive feed back on it thanks so much

on Dec. 13 2012 at 7:55 am
Eklavyaa SILVER, Kolkata, Other
6 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When I do good, I feel good. When I do bad, I feel bad. Thats my religion."-Lincoln

Well constructed. Good job!

wiesnerlover said...
on Dec. 12 2012 at 12:41 pm
wiesnerlover, Standish, California
0 articles 1 photo 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Immature love says: 'I love you because I need you.' Mature love says 'I need you because I love you.'

I thought this poem was really awesome I liked how you put questions in it, I liked how I wanted to keep reading it. I think overall this was great and I mainly liked how you brought up the birthdays and births and everything that people usually don't wonder. So good job I commend you for this writing.