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December 13, 2012
By blakrose PLATINUM, Anchorage, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;the biggest mistake you can make in life is to give up.&quot; - Rebekah Hanson<br /> &quot;think outside the shoe.&quot; - Jessica Cox<br /> &quot;angel wings break, so fly while you can.&quot; - Rose Smith

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drowning in my sorrow,
drowning in my tears,
not sure about tomorrow,
not sure about the next years.

things are so different,
without you around,
weeping and sobbing,
that's the only sound.

drowning in my wrong,
in my mistakes,
a bird with no song,
and no retakes.

we all make choices,
based on the voices,
that we hear,
in our ears.

the voices,
the choices,
just caused years,
of tears.

© David K., Birkenhead, UK

The author's comments:
this is about a breakup between me and my ex fiance. :(
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