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Torn Wings

December 15, 2012
By Kitsune-Kun BRONZE, Katy, Texas
Kitsune-Kun BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"i would rather die on paws, then live on feet"- unknown


My daydreams have betrayed me and made me fall behind. to the point were it is too late for me to catch up. My wings have been torn to shreds, ill never fly again. This world we live in, its cruel and unforgiving. If only I had my wings, i could fly, one more time. But no, i can never get them back. i will remain behind while you go on to soar through the heavens and feel freedom. all i can do is sit and dream. you who is reading this, i envy you, and i hate you. you will fly higher and higher, while i remain behind, watching and waiting for you to disappear into the horizon. we are separated by a wire cage, that i am trapped in. So go now,, leave me behind like everyone else. Fly away, and feel freedom. while i sit here, dreaming and waiting for the day when someone will break m cage, and lend me their wings.



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on Dec. 21 2012 at 7:43 pm
Kitsune-Kun BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"i would rather die on paws, then live on feet"- unknown

thank you. i wrote this months ago, when i was severely depressed. after i wrote it, i tried to cut my throat, . only thing that stopped me was my boyfriend calling me on my cell. 

on Dec. 21 2012 at 7:41 pm
Kitsune-Kun BRONZE, Katy, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"i would rather die on paws, then live on feet"- unknown

thanks for the advice ^w^

vazenitran98 said...
on Dec. 21 2012 at 7:23 pm
vazenitran98, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"I had the blues because I had no shoes until upon the street,I met a man who had no feet."

How amazing. These crude words hold deep meaning; every poem holds deep meaning. I love the poem but didn't really meet my expectations.

on Dec. 21 2012 at 5:50 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

Also you may want to fix some of the gramar, and fix up some of its flow. But beyond that good work

on Dec. 21 2012 at 12:30 am
boookworm BRONZE, Inglewood, California
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Favorite Quote:
Catchphrase

very well written! maybe next time try to write it in stanzas :)