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Soul of Coal

March 1, 2013
By SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What does not kill you makes you stronger!&quot; or<br /> &quot;Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself&quot; Love doesn&#039;t bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam


I have a soul of coal that blackens my heart. This coal I cart weighs down my heart. How terribly my heart starts to smart. But when the coal is set a blaze, up my spirits will raise. Reborn again, I walk out of life's maze. With a soul of Fire my heart rejoices with my heart light and merry. I make use of my life by making the world bright!



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Oct. 17 2013 at 6:06 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

The internal rhyme here and there especially with soul and coal add playfulness to this somewhat emotional piece. Very nicely written. 

on Aug. 23 2013 at 10:28 pm
SSSplatters PLATINUM, Plainview, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;What does not kill you makes you stronger!&quot; or<br /> &quot;Your only limits are the ones you set on yourself&quot; Love doesn&#039;t bring happiness, happiness can just happens to be found easier where there is love-- Sam

smarts means to sting or hurt so as to become painful is what i meant

midnightwoah said...
on Aug. 8 2013 at 8:17 pm
midnightwoah, Monett, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;We accept the love we think we deserve.&quot; -Stephen Chbosky

I was a bit confused at "starts to smarts." Good understanding of caring others burdens for their pleasure. :^()