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Break Apart the Sky

March 6, 2013
By Anonymous

Let the skies break apart and the higher take my soul.
If only there was a stair case to give me escape from evil.
Every day I die inside, so why doesn't he take me now?
How much more does one have to suffer until she kills herself?


The author's comments:
This one is ok, I'm not the best at poems.
But I do like that I used "higher" and by this I was referring to God, if you didn't catch that.

I was inspired by the daily crap I go through and the loneliness whose become my best friend.

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on Mar. 20 2013 at 12:19 pm
DoubttheCircles SILVER, Washougal, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
Keep swimming, keep swimming, Heaven is just on the horizon.

so did you like it or no? haha(:

on Mar. 20 2013 at 12:14 pm
DoubttheCircles SILVER, Washougal, Washington
9 articles 2 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep swimming, keep swimming, Heaven is just on the horizon.

You are very right. A person can only go for so long feeling numb. They dont want to be afraid anymore but the doubt is still there. Its sad to know there are so many others who suffer. Hope can be so hard to find, when everything is falling. Im so glad you liked it, I really appreciate your feedback(:

on Mar. 19 2013 at 4:42 pm
JoyMason PLATINUM, Arapahoe, Nebraska
25 articles 0 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
You, he who subdued me, be not insolent, forget not the beauty of virtue.

It is true that loneliness has become the friend of many individuals, and that if you go long and hard enough, the soul can break and eventually kill the person inside so that they think that no one will care if that individual is dead. I like this, because it's down to earth and stays true to what is going on right now

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on Mar. 19 2013 at 4:42 pm
Bubbs GOLD, Rowlands Gill, Other
11 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be so good that they can't ignore you."

WOW.