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It was Sunday

April 9, 2013
By LiliaVC SILVER, Nokomis, Florida
LiliaVC SILVER, Nokomis, Florida
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It was Sunday
The day I thought I broke the sky
And the watercolor blurred
And the flowers started to whisper

It was Sunday
Not so long ago
When I thought I broke the sea
And my dreams all grew faces
And the clouds started to whisper

It was Sunday
Five years from now
When I thought I broke the skin
And I was sick for months
And the keys started to whisper

It was Sunday
The day I finally broke the door
And heard whispers on the other side
And knew I had to leave.



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LiliaVC SILVER said...
on May. 6 2013 at 9:32 am
LiliaVC SILVER, Nokomis, Florida
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THANK YOU. You are honestly making my day here. Poetry is actually not my concentration, I want to be a novelist, am in the final stages of editing my first novel, and am looking for an agent. BUT THANK YOU AGAIN SO MUCH FOR YOUR LOVE. 

Mckay ELITE said...
on May. 5 2013 at 7:46 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do.&quot;<br /> &mdash;Apple&rsquo;s &ldquo;Think Different&rdquo; commercial, 1997<br /> &ldquo;Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn&#039;t understood.&rdquo; <br /> ― Weihui Zhou

All I can say, though I wish I had more to say, is that this poem is breath-taking. You are one amazing poet. Lilia, you're just starting on Teenink, and so far in my opinion you're becoming one of the best. I love your work. Palermo, no joke, is on my favorite list. And I'm not the kind to just lick anyone. This is breath-taking. Did I say that before. Oh well. It's true. Continue to write poems like this. Becuase you are god at it. ^u^