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April 25, 2013
By CuriousShadow SILVER, Wilmington, Delaware
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I remember

Being in a blind rage

I remember

Feeling my heartbeat race

A mile a minute

I remember

The heat coming from my boiling blood

Pumping in and out of my veins

I remember

Aiming my fist at the cause of my pain

I remember

Smashing my fist into something hard

I remember

Seeing the crimson drip

Down the wall overshadowing the pink paint

I remember

Blacking out in anguish

© Molly L., Phoenix, AZ

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HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 9 2013 at 7:39 pm
A very vivid descrpiton. Very nice! I would suggest adding some to the end about perhaps the emotional depth of what happened? The begining has so much potential! Consider adding on. 
NewYorkLove BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:19 pm
NewYorkLove BRONZE, Delray Beach, Florida
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&quot;Imperfection is beauty. Madness is genius. And it&#039;s better to be absolutely ridiculous than absolutely boring.&quot;-Marilyn Monroe<br /> &quot;A girl should be two things: classy and fabulous.&quot;-Coco Chanel

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Wow, you are clearly an amazing writer. Keep it up!!