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Bullied and Bully

April 15, 2013
By Snow-Angel BRONZE, NIne Mile Falls, Washington
Snow-Angel BRONZE, NIne Mile Falls, Washington
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
What is Normal? Normal is a setting on a washing machine. <br /> No one wants to be that!


Open your eyes.
Can you see me?
I'm behind the label you gave me.

Listen with your ears.
Can you hear me.
I'm yelling with the voice I have the one I'll use.

Open your heart.
Can you let me in?
i could help you if you could only see that you are not alone in this fight.

Friends.
Something we could be if you stopped labeling me.]

I'm not like you.
Your not like me.
But we could live in harmony.

Just give me a chance and you could see.

Maybe we where met to be.


The author's comments:
A story about a bullied girl who fell in love with her bully and tries to change him.

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.king. SILVER said...
on Sep. 14 2014 at 2:14 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
9 articles 4 photos 569 comments

Favorite Quote:
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I must say... it's original... I think. O_o Nicely romantic; beautiful. A few grammical errors here and there, but nice work, keep it up! :D

HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 10:32 pm
I like it, but a couple of things: 1. it is kind of unclear in some places if you made grammar mistakes or if you are trying to create an effect. I love the first three stanzas. The ryhme/rythm sounds a little forced on the fourth and towards the end. Overall, it's a nice poem with a good idea

Ari3693 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 10:30 pm
Ari3693 BRONZE, Longwood, Florida
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;You know you&#039;ve read a good book when you turn the last page and feel a little as if you have lost a friend.&rdquo;- Paul Sweeney

Really powerful, I feel as if the situation is happening to someone I know when I read this

on May. 3 2013 at 5:30 pm
Snow-Angel BRONZE, NIne Mile Falls, Washington
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
What is Normal? Normal is a setting on a washing machine. <br /> No one wants to be that!

thanks! that means alot!

on May. 3 2013 at 5:09 pm
wannabebrit SILVER, Debary, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Why are some things easier to write than say?&rdquo; <br /> ― Ally Condie, Matched<br /> <br /> &quot;There have been two great accidents in my life, one was the trolley and the other was Diego. Diego was by far the worst.&quot; ~Frida Kahlo

This is actually I really common and well written concept- my first crush was actually a bit of a bully himself so I totally grasp this concept!

on May. 3 2013 at 5:03 pm
SleepingDragon58, Groose Pointe, Michigan
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments
I really like it. Keep up the good work. :)

jess14 BRONZE said...
on May. 3 2013 at 4:17 pm
jess14 BRONZE, New York, New York
4 articles 0 photos 15 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;We accept the love we think we deserve&quot;

wow this poem is so heartbraking... how could a person fall in love with there bully  

on May. 3 2013 at 3:18 pm
Snow-Angel BRONZE, NIne Mile Falls, Washington
1 article 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
What is Normal? Normal is a setting on a washing machine. <br /> No one wants to be that!

Aw thanks you <3

on May. 3 2013 at 3:16 pm
Scarlett_the_pegacorn BRONZE, Niceville, Florida
4 articles 24 photos 136 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don&#039;t tell me how to live my life; I do what I want.

That is beautiful! :'D one of my favorite poems of all time. Seriously!