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Laying on Clouds

April 30, 2013
By Brianjkohr23 PLATINUM, Hartland, Wisconsin
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The whisper of the breeze chills me slightly.

Passing a cool grey through my body.

Ever so calmly it passes to relax me more.

On the corner of peace and serenity.

I watch this vast world pass me by.

Sitting atop these clouds I am born again.

I re-live my cherished past.

But envision this now, as I smell the air around.

I smell these vibrant colors.

These colors pass through me.

As I breathe them in and out.

This whisper of wind comes back to greet me.

My breath of fresh air.

So stay awhile will you please?

My gentle breeze upon this cloud.

© Kena A., Huntsville, AL

The author's comments:
I hope people can read my poem when ever they are stressed, and take a step back from life. To feel a sense or relief and be able to relax.
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