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Losing Love

May 8, 2013
By The.Lost.One BRONZE, Meridian, Idaho
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The.Lost.One BRONZE, Meridian, Idaho
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"The greatest way to live with honor in this world is to be what we pretend to be." -Socrates

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Broken up
Torn Apart
Shredded pieces
Of an empty heart

You lifted me up
Then tore me down
1000 feet fallen
Gone without a sound

A decade of dedication
Sweat, Blood, and Tears
The center of my life
Year after year

I promise, I will make it.
I repeated over
and over
and over again

And then when I did
You climbed out of grasp
The sweet taste of victory
Fades away fast

© Neven U., Zminj, Croatia

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