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My Valentine

May 15, 2013
By JustAnotherBandNerd BRONZE, Browns Mills, New Jersey
JustAnotherBandNerd BRONZE, Browns Mills, New Jersey
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She makes it race
She was there one minute, the next she was gone
She was nowhere in sight, somewhere beyond
She made me feel free, she made me feel light
She’s the one for me, but she left me that night
So now I sit here, sulking away
I just sit here, wasting the day
Then I hear footsteps coming up from behind
I turn to see my valentine
I hold her gaze, she holds mine
My one, my only, my valentine
We come to each other, a warm embrace
And that’s why she makes my heart race.


The author's comments:
I wrote this about not one person but many people. I am not exactly the kind of person to chose.

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on May. 18 2013 at 10:52 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. " FFDP "You're born alone and you die alone" FFDP "I wonder out where you can't see, inside my shell I wait and bleed." Slipknot " If youre 555 then I am 666"

I'm a fool, spell check trend is supposed to be end*

on May. 18 2013 at 10:50 pm
Metalhead08 GOLD, Port Republic, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather hate you for everything you are. Than ever love you for something you are not. " FFDP "You're born alone and you die alone" FFDP "I wonder out where you can't see, inside my shell I wait and bleed." Slipknot " If youre 555 then I am 666"

Great work! I like trend rhyme! I have similar end rhyme in my works. Just wow good job!