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Persist MAG

July 7, 2013
By swallowedbystreetlights PLATINUM, Arlington, Virginia
swallowedbystreetlights PLATINUM, Arlington, Virginia
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Hollow-eyed,
delicate and disheveled
her fragile limbs were not her own
she cried into the open air
everything tasted like
saltwater and the words he took back
she was all bones

Twelve train rides and
thirty-eight cups of black coffee later
she began to revel in her own skin
she kissed her knees
just
because.
She dug her fingernails into her palms
fascinated by the crescent marks they left

She greeted everyone on the street
and in the evenings
her whole self ached for him
Sixteen ice cream cones later,
she met an old woman who treated her
to glimpses of new worlds
She realized with a start
that he could not be everything
because there is just so much

She became enamored with
the way a local homeless man
smiled at the birds
She
wrote breathtaking, impassioned
poetry on her walls

she was all bones
she found wonder in her own skin,
along with a choice
to
persist to the very last sentences



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Bella13 SILVER said...
on Jun. 26 2014 at 11:11 pm
Bella13 SILVER, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Wit is educated insolence"

All I can say is... Wow!!

on Jun. 22 2014 at 2:56 am
CookieMonster24 PLATINUM, Delhi, Other
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If only I could write like this. Amamzing. 

on Jun. 14 2014 at 8:59 pm
Danielle_Cooke BRONZE, Boulder, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"I sit here before flowers, hoping they will train me in the art of opening up."

This poem is beautiful; I only wish that I could write poetry with such depth and rhythm.

on Jun. 10 2014 at 10:58 pm
Z.V.Oksana PLATINUM, Harrison, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Maybe you can afford to wait. Maybe for you there&#039;s a tomorrow. Maybe for you there&#039;s one thousand tomorrows, or three thousand, or ten, so much time you can bathe in it, roll around it, let it slide like coins through you fingers. So much time you can waste it.<br /> But for some of us there&#039;s only today. And the truth is, you never really know.&rdquo; <br /> ― Lauren Oliver, Before I Fall

Beautiful and rhythmic! I applaud you, I really enjoyed reading it. Keep writing!