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July 23, 2013
By raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
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raeee GOLD, Walla Walla, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Would she hear me if I called her name? Would she hold me if she knew my shame? Would she even love me if I was to blame?" -Favourite poem ever♥

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I know it's not easy
To open up to someone
To let them love you
But baby, I promise
I could never hurt you.
And if you just let me
Prove myself.
I will keep your heart safe.
I know it will take time.
I know you'll need time.
I'll give you love without end,
I'll wait forever to do so.
Just say when. ?

© Danielle L., League City, TX

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on Jul. 25 2013 at 9:36 pm
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