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Eden's Sweet Light

August 4, 2013
By Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

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The allure of unknown fires welding the portraits puzzles the roses.
Getting lost in the gardens hidden inside of the hypnotic gaze of the frozen.
Curing the silence of fantasy's shepherds.
Running away to the sinking castle walls.
Knights of dreams and obsidian guard the uncharted waters of Eden.

Where the flowers gracefully bloom in the riverbeds of love.
Where the cloaks of sunlight embrace your soul.
Sweep up the filth from the moonlight ground.
The truth separated from the poison unwound.
Pages shattered from the sin's echoed answers.
Conquering the ocean surface, but straying from the depths.
How can you enjoy life surrounded by death?

Floating on the waterways in the leaves' gentle sonata.
Falling off the world, as the portraits break away.
The anguish on the faces talk into my veins.
Putrid water falls from the stars.
The life of the sun lies broken.
So, I'm just here, a mask picking up the brilliant shards.

© Tatyana Z., Norwood, MA

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burningpizzavoid SILVER said...
on Apr. 28 2014 at 12:50 am
burningpizzavoid SILVER, ROYAL PALM BEACH, Florida
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omg i love this its beautiful and the word choice is amazing and i wish i could write like this
Alabian GOLD said...
on Aug. 26 2013 at 3:43 pm
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Wow. Gorgeous vocabulary you have there, Shade! You have a knack at finding the perfect words and using them in just the right way! :D
Shade3043 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 14 2013 at 2:47 am
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When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, &quot;Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping.&quot; - Fred Rogers

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Thank you very much! :D
DeathOfAStar GOLD said...
on Aug. 13 2013 at 8:55 am
DeathOfAStar GOLD, Kailua, Hawaii
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Your poem is really good. c:
Shade3043 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 13 2013 at 7:44 am
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, &quot;Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping.&quot; - Fred Rogers

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Thank you for the feedback! :D
maelstrom14 GOLD said...
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Very very good
Shade3043 DIAMOND said...
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Thank you very much! :D
Shade3043 DIAMOND said...
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When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, &quot;Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping.&quot; - Fred Rogers

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Thank you very much! Your feedback is much appreciated!
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great poem! i love the opening lines
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Great job! Good imagery. Very nice.