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The colliding of opposite hearts

September 4, 2013
By KoGRogueShadow BRONZE, Pataskala, Ohio
KoGRogueShadow BRONZE, Pataskala, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man.


We see each other differently
She sees looks and voice
I see her for her personality
It is her to make that choice

Separation is inevitable
I share her a false thought

Feeling that I will get caught

We are the colliding of opposite hearts

Opposition leads to disaster
That's why it must end

I want her to feel chosen
I said I truly loved her
But inside I feel my soul is frozen
Things aren't what they were

Now there are lies buried beneath my skin

Just for her gain
Soothe her pain
Please don't cry again

Take back what used to be
Stay away I beg you please
Take it and shove it in me
I want it to end with ease

Can't bear the fact to say
It's over now just go away
End the tears it's okay
Only you can end it today

Let go of me baby
For I do not know what I say

To make you happy I have to be sad

Our colliding hearts will fade away
Too much opposite came our way
End my pain today
End it all so I can fade away


The author's comments:
I wrote this piece to let go of my feelings. This was inspired by an old girlfriend of mine. This poem says the emotions that I had to live with for months. This may be a work of fiction, but the words in this poem are a description of my life with her, and they are real. In my poem I have been told that it makes the people who read it, feel what I felt. The only thing I hope for from the people who read this poem, is that they feel what my words are portraying.

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on Sep. 12 2013 at 9:03 am
KoGRogueShadow BRONZE, Pataskala, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man.

Thank you for reading my poem and supporting it!(:

on Sep. 11 2013 at 11:41 pm
miara_amreal BRONZE, Cebu, Other
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bady husrt, huh?? 
yeah, your poem portrayed your emotions,..nice poem ♥ like it :))

on Sep. 11 2013 at 7:58 pm
KoGRogueShadow BRONZE, Pataskala, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
He who makes a beast out of himself, gets rid of the pain of being a man.

Thank you for reading and admiring my work.

Christayla said...
on Sep. 11 2013 at 3:06 pm
Christayla, Neosho, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The reasonable man adapts himself to the world the unreasonable one persists in trying to adapt the world to himself. Therefore all progress depends on the unreasonable man. Never say you can't always believe and say "I can" and believe in yourself.

You poetry really helps portrey emotiom. I believe poetry is all about being able to reflect yourself and I believe thats what you've done.