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The Winter Evening After Work

October 2, 2013
By Theanimationbuff BRONZE, Manhasset, New York
Theanimationbuff BRONZE, Manhasset, New York
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It was a cold, Monday evening.
Work was over as well as school and
every kid and adult were free from their labored
chains for the night. Upon exiting the major hot house
called a factory, I saw the white clear snow everywhere I
went. The wind was making things even chiller and the wait for the trolley
more tedious. At last after waiting like an eternity in the cold windy semi desert, a
bright green trolley was coming down my lane. Finally, my ride home to where my warm
cozy house is here. As soon as I went in, the trolley took off like one, two, three go! But at least
it went on a nice, smooth pace. When the trolley went through the park I saw a bit of the
wonder of winter. The trees were rather bear naked but still have a charm to it. Children were
having a little playful war or fights with those snowballs and that winter breeze gave me not just
chills, but a little bit of happiness like its saying, yes winter is here and it is graceful and beautiful.

At last, my destination is near, I went off the trolley and raced my way through the snow and
wind till finally. I’m home, warm and with my loving sparkly eyed wife. At last time to cozy up in the
warmth.


The author's comments:
In a noir, a man describes hsi small travel back to his house after a tough day of work.

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