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Alone, Cold, Hurt

October 6, 2013
By MeganLaChance SILVER, Wells, Maine
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To be yourself in a world filled with people who want to change you is the worlds greatest accomplishment.

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You left me standing there
Alone
Cold
Hurt
Unanswered
I hate you for this
"What did I do"
"No one understands"
"It's all you fault"
The words escape your lips
And pain slaps me in the face
My best friend
My love
The only one
Gone
Forever
I will leave as well then

© Dillon O., Pompton Plains, NJ

The author's comments:
I recently saw a heart breaking thing on the news. A boy killed himself at homecoming in a town in Maine because his girlfriend broke up with him. I know some people have threatened to commit suicide so that's probably why it hit me so hard. If the boy that killed himself had written a poem before he did what he did I think it would have gone like this.
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