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The Path of Shattered Hope

October 11, 2013
By Freakyfrack SILVER, Murrieta, California
Freakyfrack SILVER, Murrieta, California
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If you haven't excepted a helping hand, you will never know how to give a helping hand.


When the cold creeps into your bones,
And you see the skulls among the stones,
Your courage begins to bleed away,
And your body beings to sway.
Now you know your energy is running low,
And your blood is turning to an icy flow.
Because the swirling winds in this crevice,
And the icy demons that try to subdue us.
You begin to see the other bones around you,
From those who gave up the truth.
Giving in to the deceit,
That in those dead ends you'll be hidden from the sleet,
That there will be warmth in those caves.
But now death holds them as slaves.
Your eyes try to close,
As your breathing slows.
Then the Ice grabs your heart.
And the last of your truth shatters apart.


The author's comments:
I'm not really sure of what inspired me ti write this. I think i was looking for the right choice to make, the right path per say. But in the end it just turned dark, maybe I was sad at the time.

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on Jan. 6 2014 at 11:39 pm
Freakyfrack SILVER, Murrieta, California
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If you haven't excepted a helping hand, you will never know how to give a helping hand.

Thanks so much for your comment! It means a lot to know my work inspires people.

on Dec. 25 2013 at 2:46 pm
Claire_Eliza26 GOLD, Traverse City, Michigan
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They tell us, "destroy what destroys you" and then they get mad when we hurt ourselves

I seriously love this..great work! I keep re-reading it because it's so inspiring