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love <3

November 16, 2013
By kirstenmarie BRONZE, Bay Shore, New York
kirstenmarie BRONZE, Bay Shore, New York
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Favorite Quote:
if you have a dream, chase it, it wont be there forever <3


My dreams are memories and what I want
the problem is your in every one
that tan body and bushy hair
it intrigues me more every time I stare
I try to forget you but your burned into the back of my mind
when I gaze into those big brown eyes, I see a piece of me
each and every time
I try to love other men but I see you in all of them
why did I fall for you?
I replay in the back of my head
nothing comes up
no idea
maybe were meant to be
your eyes are comforting
your laugh is amazing
but what really gets me is the way you look at me
it scares me to love someone as much as I do
this feeling isn’t normal to me its scary as can be
but when you grab my back and pull me closer
kiss my lips
it makes me understand more
this isn’t just any kind of feeling
its what everybody wants and needs
its love
its the best feeling in eternity



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on Dec. 8 2013 at 4:28 pm
boundlesswildflower SILVER, Minneapolis, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Some infinities are bigger than other infinities." - faults in our stars by John Green

Wow, awesome intrepretation and metaphors!!! I completely agree with your outlook on love, its extremely metaphoric and alliteration-like, explaining it so amazingingly!! :). Only suggestion is to take out some pronouns to make your poem flow perfectly, but other than that: great job!!