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Memories

January 4, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
30 articles 0 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live


I am a castle of emotions,
Built by his moments in the past;
I might haven't existed if time didn't fly fast!
I'm nothing in the present,
Yet he lives me every now.
I may be old, still new,
Filling every space of time;
I lead him to ecstasy, but sometimes just blue.
I pour at times like a shower of rain
And leave behind beautiful drops of gay,
Or perhaps a continual chain
Which he wishes, would just stay.
I wasn't known till he passed my past,
for he had to sometime, hit the final mark.
When all in his mind is just vacuum,
I'm always there, to replace it with a tune.
I am a castle of emotions,
Built by his moments in the past;
I may not exist if time doesn't fly fast!



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on Aug. 23 2014 at 9:50 am
TheComet PLATINUM, Mostaganem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Speak when you are angry and you will make the best speech you will ever regret&quot; -Ambrose Bierce<br /> &quot; Be yourself! Everybody else is already taken ;)&quot;<br /> &quot;Don&#039;t go where the path leads you. Go instead where there&#039;s no path and leave a trail ;)&quot;-R.W.Emerson

This is deep and very poetic. Your poem took me away to the past...Amazing, right?! How memories will always remain engraved in our minds and safe in our hearts, no matter how fast time flies by. I see a lot of potential here so keep it up and never stop writing ^_^ Defenitly 5 stars. Thank you for sharing this :)

GEEPEE said...
on Mar. 6 2014 at 2:50 am
Real Good one

on Jan. 5 2014 at 8:50 am
UNDOUBTEDLY MOST OF THE HUMANS CAN HAVE THEIR FLASH BACK BY READING THIS POEM