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Iridescence in the dark

January 26, 2014
By WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
WickedDreamer PLATINUM, Salem, Other
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Favorite Quote:
The legacy you leave is the one you live


Dark is all in his sight, But iridescence his light! I reflect, why am I blinded, From watching the color of his art? And now I discern why, For his spectrum would fly, Straight from his heart! I yearn to live The life of his eyes, And know the colours Of his waters and his skies! I wish I could live The life of his skin, And breathe in the colour Of the clear dew drop. Why can’t I live his senses And realize the colour of the flowers, When grow their fragrances Along the whistle of the air? To experience his sphere’s chroma, I close my peepers; My sight goes off, but my insight on; There I see not murk, But his soul’s Iridescence in the dark!


The author's comments:

I have vision, yet I don't; He doesn't have "The vision", yet he does! Am I blinded from watching his soul's colors just because I've got sight?


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JRaye PLATINUM said...
on May. 22 2014 at 4:39 pm
JRaye PLATINUM, Dorr, Michigan
43 articles 10 photos 523 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;If you build your house far enough away from Trouble, then Trouble will never find you.&quot;<br /> <br /> &quot;Have you ever looked fear in the face and said, &#039;I just don&#039;t care.&#039;?&quot;

I liked it :) To me, it felt like you were envious of what how a blind man sees the world. I will agree with Luv4Ever about the exclamation points, but other than that it was really good :)

on May. 18 2014 at 10:13 am
Luv4Ever SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
A miracle is just another name for hard work<br /> -Minho in &quot;To The Beautiful You&quot;

I love your use of words but i feel that the exclamation ponts take away from your poem

on Feb. 27 2014 at 4:40 am
KshitijKothari SILVER, Pune, Other
7 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
Only that day dawns to which we are awake.<br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> <br /> - Thoreau (Walden and Other writings)

well done proud of you

on Jan. 28 2014 at 8:49 am
I think this poet is always gives importance to HUMANITY.   A different look and feel about VISION.  Good

on Jan. 27 2014 at 9:40 am
A GREAT MESSAGE BY A POET "IF YOU LOOK AND FEEL DEEP INTO IT "YOU WILL THINK OF DONATING YOUR EYES"