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Fall(ing) MAG

November 8, 2008
By Anonymous

Today, as I look around, I see autumn.
There’s a certain sadness in it, but I know the sun can’t stay forever.
With every change of mood I’m closer to the falling leaves.
I might just become one.
Would you still remember me?
The songs I sing are all about you, even when they’re not at all.
I take the heartbreak everywhere.
All the same places that I take the memories.
I can’t function because something inside of me says, “No, I won’t forget.”
And today, as I look around, I just see you.
There’s a certain sadness in it, but I always knew you couldn’t stay forever.



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on Feb. 3 2012 at 4:43 pm
Eminellie13, Ft. Collins, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Your success is best measured by the talents you&#039;ve been given.&quot;<br /> ~Anonymous

i really love this poem! keep writing :) you have a talent to share

on Jun. 5 2011 at 2:18 pm
ashlalaley993 BRONZE, Artesia, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
You never quit on your music, no matter what happens. &#039;Cause any time something bad happens to you, it&#039;s the one place you can escape to and just . . Let it go. ---August Rush

I loved this. so much. it just, it really spoke to me. you are an amazing writer!

on Jan. 20 2011 at 10:55 am
June_Survive SILVER, Kirbyville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Limitations live only in our minds. But if we use our imaginations, our possibilities become limitless.&rdquo; -Jamie Paolinetti<br /> <br /> &quot;In the end, everything will be okay. If everything is not okay, it&#039;s not the end.&quot;<br /> Unknown

Holy wow; I loved this.. check out my work?

on Apr. 12 2010 at 11:32 am
I love it! It's actually exactly how I feel right now.

on Feb. 3 2010 at 5:36 pm
paperpen4 BRONZE, Middlefield, Massachusetts
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I love how the ending took you back to the beginning. <3

on Aug. 11 2009 at 2:14 am
GlassHeart SILVER, Black Earth, Wisconsin
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Really pretty!

on Aug. 10 2009 at 5:50 pm
Pink_Butterfly, FC, Other
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Never say there is nothing beautiful in the world anymore. There is always something to make wonder in the shape of a tree, the trembling of a leaf.&quot;<br /> - Albert Schweitzer.

Beautiful, !!

on Aug. 10 2009 at 3:23 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

LOVED IT!!! it's wonderful!!

on Aug. 10 2009 at 2:33 pm
PinkPrincess GOLD, Wellington, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I think therefore I am

love the poem

on Aug. 10 2009 at 7:31 am
rockmysoxoff25 BRONZE, San Diego, California
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beautiful(:

on Jul. 22 2009 at 3:12 pm
Kelly Johnson BRONZE, Silver Spring, Maryland
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This is a beautiful poem.