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February 26, 2014
By hopeisnotcrazy SILVER, None, Virginia
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what does it feel like
for your lungs to fill up with water
slowly
submerging
making it a little bit harder to breathe
each passing day
until you can’t take the pressure anymore
until it’s impossible to have one breath of air
and you drown

© Gabriela W., Acton, MA

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theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM said...
on Mar. 6 2014 at 10:20 pm
theSunfloweredCrow PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
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I like this poem a lot! I love how the picture accompanies this perfectly and how you presented it in a new way and didn't make it cliche. :)
mwurzer4 DIAMOND said...
on Mar. 6 2014 at 1:06 pm
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the line "each passing day" really makes this poem!