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April 1, 2014
By Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
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Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
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Hello

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Step..step
The sun covers my face
But the warmth..
It passes me by
To carry petals
In their dance

Silence
Skin and bone
Have nothing more to say
Tears of sweat
Go up in smoke

Crack to crunch
Doesn't matter
Frozen dreams won't stop their fall
Just the way it is

Now..
I don't feel
I've gone numb
Let me howl in peace

© Eric E., Lexington, MA

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jacey_poo BRONZE said...
on Apr. 19 2014 at 12:53 am
jacey_poo BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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This is great, I love the emotion, keep writing
Nobuo GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2014 at 1:31 pm
Nobuo GOLD, Dio, Missouri
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What do you mean by ellipsis? Please tell me how I can change it
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 11 2014 at 11:36 am
JacobTheOrdinary PLATINUM, Rancho Cucamonga, California
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The poem is nice. I'd appreciate it if you used an ellipsis instead of just two periods. . . That's the only critizism I have. I'm expecting more now, so keep writing.
HudaZav SILVER said...
on Apr. 9 2014 at 6:05 pm
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That first stanza got me hooked right away. I love that the title is simple, but the poem is very elaborate. Good imagery, great job!
iimoeloveii GOLD said...
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Great poem keep writing