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The Greedy Groundhog

April 26, 2014
By Erin MacDonald BRONZE, Plymouth, Michigan
Erin MacDonald BRONZE, Plymouth, Michigan
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I looked outside and what did I see?
A little groundhog waving at me
I went downstairs to see what it needed
Oh boy, that hog was very conceded!

He wanted a blender, toilet, and a TV
That hog wanted a bracelet made for his knee!
He asked for a pool, swing, and a house
He wanted his own customized blouse!

He was crazy as can be
That hog wanted me to make him tea
He wanted 30 scoops of ice cream
But then I woke up, and realized it was a dream


The author's comments:
When I was about to write a poem, I looked outside my window and saw a groundhog!

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on May. 5 2014 at 2:48 pm
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

That's adorable, but seriously, what medication were you on when you wrote this? I'm just kidding. I love this immensely. The rhyming is so perfect and the images you put in my head were precious. If anything, I'd mess around with the last stanza a little to see what better things you can do with it. I like how the poem ends, but I feel like you could make that ending better. If you know what I mean?

on May. 5 2014 at 12:57 pm
bewareofbunnyrabbits SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Empty yourself and let the universe fill you." -Yogi Tea

Teehee, this is so cute :)