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goodbye

May 11, 2014
By babyelmo BRONZE, Lexington, North Carolina
babyelmo BRONZE, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"if its ment to be it will be"


tears fall like rain
as i feel this pain
while you say goodbye
i can no longer fly
i fall so fast from the sky
trying to fly so high
i begin to cry
and then i die
now my pain is gone
as you live on



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on May. 28 2014 at 11:39 pm
babyelmo BRONZE, Lexington, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"if its ment to be it will be"

heyy thanks and i was reading your poem and it is really interesting and i like the way you wrote it!!

on May. 26 2014 at 8:39 pm
HedaBecca SILVER, Westfield, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is weakness. Weakness is death. The dead are gone. The living are hungry. Feed them our fears and watch as they choke." - Tumblr

Love the aura behind it. I'd love to see it written in free verse c:

on May. 24 2014 at 11:07 pm
Olivia-Atlet ELITE, Dardenne Prairie, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"To these the past hath its phantoms,<br /> More real than solid earth;<br /> And to these death does not mean decay,<br /> But only another birth" <br /> - Isabella Banks