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Nature High

May 27, 2014
By herbertv BRONZE, Wilmingtion, New York
herbertv BRONZE, Wilmingtion, New York
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the wind blows
the leaves quake
inhale the smell
in natures wake.

mother earth, she provides
the green grass
and beautiful blue skies.

the water churnes
in river and streams
it's like home to me.

sweet arouma of all she gives
the tree's, the bush, the lonly fig.
blue jay's glide, i watch them fly
into the woods, its my kind of high.



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MichD said...
on Jun. 4 2014 at 9:50 am
MichD, Clintonville, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"This above all, to thine own self be true." ~ William Shakespeare

Herbie, I'm proud of your work in Creative Writing, and I love this poem. :) Mrs. D 

on Jun. 2 2014 at 8:52 pm
PianoKeys97 PLATINUM, Medford, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You can be the ripest, juiciest peach in the world, and there's still going to be somebody who hates peaches." -Dita Von Teese

Beautiful meaning and word choice.

on Jun. 2 2014 at 4:37 pm
herbertv BRONZE, Wilmingtion, New York
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Thanks everyone

on Jun. 2 2014 at 12:51 pm
bewareofbunnyrabbits SILVER, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Empty yourself and let the universe fill you." -Yogi Tea

Ditto that!! :) This is a great poem. 

on Jun. 2 2014 at 11:18 am
AbigailGilgal GOLD, Cloquet, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"I write for the same reason I breath- because if I didn't, I would die"
~Isaac Asimov

"There is nothing to writing. All you do is sit down at the typewriter and bleed."
~ Ernest Hemingway

Love it! The simplicity of the words and the ryming sceme add to the meaning of the overall poem.