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dont over think it
June 22, 2014
People think too much,they travel all the way out there and don't come back. When you think of something you over think it never knowing it's right there in front of your eyes all this time. Time passes by and you're still looking for it. You never know what you're looking for until you think straight...until you find what you're looking for. So don't over think it take your time. Think about it and seek what you're looking for. Find your treasure...and claim your gold before someone steels it and takes it away...forever.
© Gina M., Marblehead, MA
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deeplythinking GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2014 at 2:41 pm
Simple and concise. The poem provides rhthym and voice and this combined with motivational words makes it a 5/5 Great job!
This has some awesome style and feel to it. It seems like it's all over the place in a way, yet it's all put together and makes complete sense. I love the writing- it's great. The only thing I would change is perhaps placing more grammar into the text to make it easier to read, so it's more set up like a poem. Other than that, I love it. Awesome job!
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"Among them, not of them" ~Lord Byron<br /> <br /> "I may be on the side of the angels, but don't think for one second that I *am* one of them." ~Sherlock