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Nature's Wind

July 30, 2014
By EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
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EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
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Whoosh!
The sound, the feel,
The life of wind.
Impossible to decipher.
The sound of a million breaths.
It’s a shot of adrenaline,
A drum beat, A summer in Rome.
The reassuring caress of family,
Of home.

© Cassie H., Carmi, IL

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EttieGH GOLD said...
on Feb. 17 2015 at 12:52 am
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
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Thanks:)That's sort of what it started off as
Allen. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 15 2015 at 8:59 am
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This has a nice feel, almost like a longer version of a haiku. I very much enjoyed it.
EttieGH GOLD said...
on Jan. 30 2015 at 4:30 am
EttieGH GOLD, Mbabane, Other
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Yeah, now that I've reread it I can see that. Thanks for the tip:)
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on Jan. 27 2015 at 5:22 pm
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This was a superb piece. you did a great job packing so much feeling into just a few lines. My only suggestion would be to change the first word. your whole poem flows really well but whoosh is to choppy sounding. Just my opinion though :)