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5 days of summer

October 8, 2014
By kmbaldwin15 BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
kmbaldwin15 BRONZE, Detroit, Michigan
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In any case, I
Didn’t mind the emptiness.
Light blue skies during the day,
Bright stars on pitch
Black at night.

I feel like,
a Tiny spec just drifting about when I look
Out into empty sea from
Deck 3

I might say that
Being so unknowingly isolated
from Civilization brought
the Familiar and unfamiliar
Together.

Now in fact, you can’t
Separate them.

but let us have deep sympathy
for Buddy, a dog who fell asleep
by the edge of the door
Awaiting a joyful return.

But I don’t want to talk about the
Sadness of the summer I did not attend,
I want to
Reminisce.


The author's comments:

In the poem “5 days of summer”, Kieerra adds a lot of new vocabulary to make the poem come alive. She also used some of the devices the author Yousef K. had. He used capitalization for the start of every new line break. A reason why she used this method is because it added emphasis on important words by capitalizing them. In doing this, it allowed Kieerra to paint more vivid picture the second time around. This brought the poem alive


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