When Love is Love | Teen Ink

When Love is Love

October 15, 2014
By idkmanguy GOLD, Ballwin, Missouri
idkmanguy GOLD, Ballwin, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"It was the patient, cut-flower sound of a man waiting to die." - Patrick Rothfuss


Blossoms, or,

A joyful dove,

What has it to do

With glorious love?

 

Blossoms are but pretty plants,

A dove will only sing,

but look to love

and you will hear

a very special ring.

 

Love is love

when in the raw

Cutting your soul

As if with a saw...

 

The jagged edges

Peircing into your heart

Stay away from love

If you're smart.


The author's comments:

Hey! Tim here, haven't been on teen ink in a while... too much math ;-;

However, i wanted to write a unique love poem... one that isn't about loving something but rather one that defines love. I also played around with the formatting  bit... please give your opinion and any suggestions or mistakes that you saw in here! Hope you enjoyed!


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