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An Unfettered World
November 8, 2014
For the colors of nature
can only be orchestrated,
When we don't tack our genius.
Let us fly to the seamless sky,
and be independent birds,
Out of pound,
Without spleen
and invent, discover and create
a new untrammelled world
outside us, inside us...
© Brandon T., Manila, UT
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This article has 86 comments.
David14 said...
on Mar. 11 2015 at 8:59 am
I love the poem!!! u r an amazin' writer!!!
Hers said...
on Mar. 1 2015 at 1:16 am
I really love the idea of true freedom! And the description is beautiful!
GGauns said...
on Feb. 20 2015 at 8:42 am
Wow.. this is real good.. can u read and comment on mine?? TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/753433/The-Unforgotten-Memories/
FinditKeepit said...
on Feb. 6 2015 at 10:53 am
Very good Jasmine11! I guess that the spectrum of emotions one finds in your poems has been taken from India, a very diverse nation. I read you other poem too. Your writing style brings within me freshness and childlike sensation. So, good work!
Mikey123 said...
on Jan. 26 2015 at 3:05 am
Nice work!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2015 at 5:28 am
It's good that you like it!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2015 at 5:27 am
Thank you!
xxIRoxxx said...
on Jan. 19 2015 at 5:18 am
Beautiful message! Short but strong. A thumbs up to you!
xxIRoxxx said...
on Jan. 19 2015 at 5:12 am
Your poems are chocolatastic!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2015 at 4:50 am
Thank you. You have a refreshing perspective!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 19 2015 at 4:49 am
Thank you for the comment.
Vidisha said...
on Jan. 18 2015 at 8:50 am
What a lovely, enchanting poem. It's very refreshing and I loved the use of words. It's like a kaleidoscope of sound when you read it aloud, and has a great theme. Well done!
Nuggets said...
on Jan. 16 2015 at 11:02 am
Fantastic poem!
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2015 at 7:38 am
Thanks SpaceTravel. A new eye and a new idea always brings in a new perspective.
SpaceTravel said...
on Jan. 16 2015 at 7:36 am
Your poem is very enchanting. The line outside us, inside us indicates very beautifully that not only should we create an independent place with selfless emotions within us but also give the same satisfaction to everybody around us and have optimism everywhere.
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 16 2015 at 7:23 am
Thank you!
xxIRoxxx said...
on Jan. 16 2015 at 7:17 am
Nice poem. You're a really good poet.
MatchaJasmine BRONZE said...
on Jan. 14 2015 at 10:36 am
Thanks! Even I love that line, that's why I included it in the poem.
Nature beautifies our lives, adding color to our horizons and sky.