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When the Music Stops

February 15, 2015
By Agraced SILVER, Brookfield, New Hampshire
Agraced SILVER, Brookfield, New Hampshire
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I guess we are who we are for a lot of reasons. And maybe we'll never know most of them. But even if we don't have the power to choose where we come from, we can still choose where we go from there.


Record spinning beneath a single burning candle,

Fighting the darkness settling in.

Your hands grasp my hips

As we sway back and fourth to the music

Filling the air with hope;

Hope that I can over come

This burning uncertainty in my lungs.

Your wind is free of worry,

Settling into the cold basement floor

With the dormant dust.

This fickle love that only I can see

Is rotting away at every last drop of faith I have,

Draining out the tips of my fingers.

As the last beam of the setting sun reaches through the window,

The room is eaten by dominating darkness

And the single candle is left to luminate the room entirely on its own.

The song begins to fade away,

Leaving the startling sound of the needle scraping the center of the vinyl.

The music stops,

The light blows out,

And you open your eyes.


The author's comments:

This piece is about a love in which the people don't feel the same for one another.   The boy is completely infatuated by the girl, lost in the feelings he has for her, while the girl knows she doesn't feel the same, but doesn't want to hurt him. This poem is about the boy awakenning from his fantasy. 


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