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December 17, 2008
By AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks


And I remember she wouldn’t wake up.
Her lips were mushed together in a
Horrible shade of red
They buried my mother in a white dress
And red lips.
And she couldn’t see.
Where are your glasses, Mommy?
And still at sixteen I bring them to my face
And peer through the distorted murky lenses
To see what she saw
Maybe one day …
And I remember it hitting me
Like it does every day
When I hear them all talk and complain about their
“Horrible” mothers
What’s it like to have a mother
I’d give anything to know,
Or at least for them to know how lucky they are.
They know.
And I remember she wouldn’t sit up
And I dreamed of a stuffing machine because
Someone whispered by my ear she was
Cut in half and stuffed
And it made no sense
And still at sixteen I wonder
What happened to my mother?
And I remember her faintly
She doesn’t even smile in my dreams anymore
And I wonder if she’ll ever be proud of me
If she’d ever approve of me
And who I’ve become
The things I’ve seen
The things I’ve done
And I remember her singing
Though I can’t hear her voice
The only happy Christmas I hold on to
Every year
Maybe one day it’ll come back
I used to think
Maybe one day she’d come back
And still at sixteen I hope
Maybe one day she’ll come back …
And I remember she wouldn’t wake up
Not even to say good-bye.



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on Mar. 11 2011 at 3:59 pm
AthenaBook SILVER, Arlington, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
You should not live the way the world asks, but the way that you ask of yourself.

This poem was really inspirational to me, as I lost my mother when I was 9. It's really hard because I'm such an akward person and I get made fun of a lot. But what people don't understand is that I never had a mom to teach me all these things- she was sick for many years before she died, so I pretty much never had a mother at home. Thank you so much for writing this and letting reviewers mourn with you. It was very well written and expressive. Thanks.

AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:12 am
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

Thank you.

It's based on truth-to answer your question :)

thank you for reading!


AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:11 am
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

Sure, I'm always available to talk of you want to add my Facebook =] search me by name

AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:09 am
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

I'm glad ^__^

AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Mar. 11 2011 at 12:08 am
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

It's based off of the passing of my mother. She died three days after I turned 7... Mainly I wrote it though for people who don't realise how lucky they are. =]

on Mar. 10 2011 at 2:21 pm
babygirl123495 BRONZE, Eau Calire, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
you dont see the turn you just see the road ahead

this is a really good and touching pome

on Mar. 10 2011 at 11:10 am
Wat did u write dis based off of????? 

on Mar. 10 2011 at 11:01 am
i like it!!!!!! i m soo sorry if it really happened 2 u!!! =( 

on Mar. 10 2011 at 9:55 am
ForgottenSomeHow PLATINUM, Harrison, Arkansas
39 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Many Things Are Said,<br /> Many Words Are Meant,<br /> It&#039;s The One&#039;s That Hurt You The Most,<br /> You Don&#039;t Never Forget.

Your Not The Only One Who Has Motherly Problems, Half The World Goes Through Theses Things Everyday. I Just Hope There Be Someone With You Through Each Day.

on Mar. 3 2011 at 6:47 pm
to.hold.the.sun SILVER, Maryville, Tennessee
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;You spend your whole life stuck in the labyrinth, thinking about how you&#039;ll escape it one day, and how awesome it will be, and imagining that future keeps you going, but you never do it. You just use the future to escape the present.&quot; -John Green

Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

on Mar. 3 2011 at 6:25 pm
mcnwritingsoul SILVER, Fairfield, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;They can&#039;t scare me, if I scare them first.&quot; -Lady Gaga<br /> &amp;<br /> &quot;I remember watching the mascara tears flood the ivories and I thought, &quot;It&#039;s OK to be sad.&quot; I&#039;ve been trained to love my darkness.&quot; -Lady Gaga

omg. this is so deep!!! i luv it!!! can you (and anyone who reads this comment) plzz read and comment vote my poems?? im STARVING for feedback!!!

on Mar. 3 2011 at 6:13 pm
AmberSpice BRONZE, Grand Juntion, Colorado
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I cried when I read this.. I myself have gone through losing my mother and I can relate so much to this piece.. I hope you continue writing because I believe that you could really become something of it! You are truely gifted!

on Mar. 3 2011 at 6:02 pm
dancingintheflames GOLD, Kirksville, Missouri
18 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
She stood in the storm and when the wind didn&#039;t blow her away, she adjusted her sails&lt;3

If this happened to u which i think it did i am soo sorry! that must be horrible! i want you to know that i will pray for you and your family.

 


on Mar. 3 2011 at 5:50 pm
PaRaNoRmAl627 GOLD, Mountainside, New Jersey
15 articles 0 photos 296 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Do what you want. If it&#039;s something you&#039;ll regret in the morning, sleep late.&quot;

I don't get along with my mom anymore, and this poem made me go back and think about how much she really means to me. thanks for that<3

on Mar. 3 2011 at 12:31 pm
kkTaylor BRONZE, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
4 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You are the controller of an unplanned game.&quot; -Kayla Taylor

I love your poem hunn. I wish i could write like you.

on Feb. 28 2011 at 7:53 pm
wow... thats deep. i love it. makes me all the more thankful for the mother i have. your an amazing writer

on Feb. 28 2011 at 6:48 pm
whitetiger303 PLATINUM, Elmira, New York
25 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Nothing last forever&quot;

Thats deep I like it. It has alot of feeling.

on Feb. 26 2011 at 9:18 am
MaliyahP. SILVER, Milwaukee, Wisconsin
9 articles 0 photos 41 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are pirate ships and steam ships but the best ship of all is friendship.

I have never read such of marvelous poem...I'm so jealous!!!

on Feb. 25 2011 at 11:10 pm
ftshooter41 SILVER, Baldwin Place, New York
7 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
One man can be a crucial ingredient on a team, but one man cannot make a team. <br /> -Kareem Abdul-Jabbar

deep. like how you used ur feelings to the poem

AmbRawr BRONZE said...
on Feb. 25 2011 at 1:24 pm
AmbRawr BRONZE, Allentown, Pennsylvania
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
We choose the love we think we deserve ~The Perks

Wow, it seems as though every time I feel strong enough to read the comments left on this piece, I cry and am in awe. Thanks to everyone who commented, I wish I could go through and respond to each and every one but it looks as though it'd take forever. Anyone who'd like me to check out their work and comment though should Facebook me a message with a link and I will =]

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