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Forgive Me

October 20, 2015
By ScarlettJ. DIAMOND, West Newton, Pennsylvania
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"You are only confined by the walls you build around yourself." "Follow your heart, but take your brain with you." "You were born to be real, not to be perfect."

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Forgive me.

Forgive me.

Forgive me.

Forgive me.

Forgive me.

Forgive me!

 

Unravel me, love me, hate me, abuse me with your toxic flavor. I want you, to taste you. To fogive you for what you've done.

Unshatter me. Unbreak this heart.

 

Forgive me.

Forgive us.

Forgive.

FORGIVE!

 

I'm being devoured by the sickness, the hatred, the agony. Forgive me for forgiving you. Take away this honor and these sins. I'm shaking.

 

Breakable, unbreakable.

Unbreakable, breakable.

 

Let me go let me forgive allow me to exist!

 

The fire has never burned so fierce. 

© Garrett M., Port Angeles, WA

The author's comments:

Sorry guys, but this was a little something that sprang to my mind when I was bored. I hope it isn't too strange.

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ScarlettJ. DIAMOND said...
on Dec. 8 2015 at 1:19 pm
ScarlettJ. DIAMOND, West Newton, Pennsylvania
92 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You are only confined by the walls you build around yourself.&quot; &quot;Follow your heart, but take your brain with you.&quot; &quot;You were born to be real, not to be perfect.&quot;

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Thanks, @Anastasia.Z :) I wasn't really sure what I was doing here haha. I was bored and went with it I guess.
Anastasia.Z BRONZE said...
on Nov. 19 2015 at 1:55 pm
Anastasia.Z BRONZE, West Newton, Pennsylvania
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This piece is not like your other writing, you just went with it. I liked it, a lot. It was interesting! It's like you placed your heart on the paper and words formed. I liked it, and your last sentence was powerful!