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I Need to Go

March 7, 2016
By kingsmart21 SILVER, Paris, Tennessee
kingsmart21 SILVER, Paris, Tennessee
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I need to go,
But I can’t go.
I really need to go, though.
I feel like it’s gonna blow!

 

Can I ask to go?
Probably no.
I’m afraid to ask, though.
It’s an emergency,  I know.

 

I can’t keep it in, oh.
Don’t let it go!
Too late, it just flowed.
Oh no, but it feels good though.


The author's comments:

One time in class, a creative writing class, I really needed to use the bathroom, but I thought I couldn't, so as I tried to hold it in, I decided to write something to keep my mind off of it, which soon evolved into this poem before you. This is meant to be a funny poem that probably anybody can relate to.


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LILLY U said...
on Mar. 18 2016 at 2:46 pm
GREAT JOB KES