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THE MYSTERIOUS PRESENCE PART 1

August 18, 2016
By M501athletic GOLD, USA, Other
M501athletic GOLD, USA, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It is never too late to have a new dream- C.S. Lewis


Time is wasting, hesitating

I can feel the mysterious breeze
I hear hollow footsteps coming toward me
I hide my treasures quickly with haste I really don’t have time to waste
I hid the money on my dresser
This is really too much pressure
I see one thing that catches my eye
A diamond ring that controls the sky
That is what he is coming for
The diamond ring and nothing more
I start to pick up more things from the floor
I grab my cell phone from my drawer
I start to call the number that will save me forever more
Until I heard a BANG on the door!


The author's comments:

Here is part 1 of my poem. Please comment, and if you want me to review your work in your comments hashtag #Review and I will. Thanks! Enjoy!


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