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THE MYSTERIOUS PRESENCE PART 2
The Bang gets louder
The door is shattered
I hide behind the closet door
He wants my diamond ring and nothing more
Glass breaks
My stomach aches
My house will be ruined for goodness sake
When I hear him enter the room
I feel nothing but terrible doom
“Come on out Lori Galore, I want your ring and nothing more!”
The ring can’t control when he is near
But when he leaves night will be here
It will work and he will be forever gone
Unless there is fire then he has won
Fire and diamonds are not a good match
But winter and diamonds will seal the patch
I smell something burning and soon I cannot breathe
Smoke fills the air and then I hear footsteps leave
I come out from my hiding place and what do I see?
My house is on fire! And I cannot go
The fire hazard in front of the door causes me to go slow
I move everything quickly and run outside
He has left, so I won’t have to hide
I sat on the grass and watched my house collide
Then removing my hands from my face, I look up, then cry
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