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Tell me What you Think

November 1, 2017
By ranchingurl GOLD, Dagmar, Montana
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Be yourself, there's no one better.

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Nothing ever makes sense
When I put it on paper
Yet never looks like nonsense
When I think about it harder

I guess I'm my own worse critic
Least that's what people say
Think if it's them I mimic
I'll get better each day

I guess the point I'm trying to make
To think about my writing honestly
I need to get anothers take
On what they think entirely

If it hurts too much to read
Please don't go any further
Don't do it to complete your daily deed
It'll only make you madder

But if you did I thank you much
For I truly do appreciate it
Now tell me your first true hunch
On what you think on how I write

© Michael H., Mildford, CT

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