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Forbidden Fruit Haiku

June 3, 2009
By NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
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Looking for beauty
Sees it hanging over him
The Forbidden Fruit

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Mihini_dinethma2011 SILVER said...
on May. 24 2024 at 11:33 am
Mihini_dinethma2011 SILVER, Dehiwala, Other
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It’s amazing….
NoniDoni GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 8:44 pm
NoniDoni GOLD, Calabasas, California
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It's so... magical! I never in a million years would have thought of something that creative in such few words! Nice work!
Suemayeh said...
on Jan. 5 2015 at 8:38 pm
This is a really good poem. I personally like haiku's and this one is amazing. Its short but great.
Angel1932 PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 28 2013 at 8:39 pm
Angel1932 PLATINUM, Antioch, California
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This is beautiful! Excellent work!  ~Please check out some of my work. 
JessicaQ PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 22 2012 at 10:54 am
JessicaQ PLATINUM, North Vancouver, British Columbia, Other
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I like it! It's so…… original :P Check out my stuff?
dragonfly95 SILVER said...
on Mar. 31 2012 at 8:57 am
dragonfly95 SILVER, Argaon, Georgia
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this is strongly written,forbidden fruit... wow!check out my work please and thank you
IamtheshyStargirl PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 29 2011 at 12:52 pm
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Pretty :]

 

MizzCizz BRONZE said...
on Dec. 3 2010 at 1:18 pm
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gosh, this is sooo short and means nothing but it is soooooo strong! x love it. write more :D
*Jade* said...
on Feb. 20 2010 at 8:19 pm
even though you got first and i got second im proud to say im glad you did better this poem is amazingly awsome! keep writing!
StandardToaster PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 11 2010 at 9:41 pm
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great job i love this. check out my work? http ://www.teenink .com /poetry/all/article/168414/Heart-on-Fire/
whisperingofdawn GOLD said...
on Nov. 24 2009 at 3:24 pm
whisperingofdawn GOLD, Colorado City, Arizona
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i love how the words 'forbidden fruit' bring so much to the picture.
warriorsfan711 SILVER said...
on Nov. 19 2009 at 8:06 am
warriorsfan711 SILVER, Plant City, Florida
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Same Here!
NamezTJ PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 3 2009 at 4:40 pm
NamezTJ PLATINUM, Scottsville, New York
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&quot;Life is like a box of chocolates....&quot; (haha got to love Forest Gump)

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thank you! it means a lot
Phantom_Girl GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 9:55 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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That's pretty! It's very original.
trying2fitin said...
on Sep. 4 2009 at 4:14 pm
that is amazing. i love haikus its all i write