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Why did you have to go?

April 29, 2010
By Dezziibabbii BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
Dezziibabbii BRONZE, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"tomorrow is not promised so dont mess up today"


No sound or movement
chicken too long in the freezer
heart too long on ice

My face still as rock
a tear drops to the red floor
filled with all his blood

Why is she screaming?
my ears are ringing so hard
I jus want to cry

He then makes a sound
My body fell to the ground
Feel him breathe on me

She is still screaming
Voice says call the cops someone
ears stop ringig now

Body on the floor
Grabs my hand and breaths harder
tells me too let go

So I close my eyes
thought about all the good times
then his hand let go


The author's comments:
It is writen for my brother when he was shot, but he still lives on to tell his story.

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on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:42 pm
jazzi3boo BRONZE, New York, New York
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This is deep